Legendborn: YMMV

Legendborn by Tracy Deonn science fiction and fantasy book and audiobook reviewsLegendborn by Tracy Deonn science fiction and fantasy book and audiobook reviewsLegendborn by Tracy Deonn

Tracy Deonn’s Legendborn (2020), the first book in her LEGENDBORN CYCLE, wasn’t on my radar until I saw it on this year’s Locus Awards finalists list for Best Young Adult novel. I grabbed the audiobook and one of the YAs that lives in my house (Tali, my 18-year-old daughter) and we listened to Legendborn together as we worked a jigsaw puzzle. We agreed to give Legendborn a rating of 3.5 which is quite a bit lower than the book currently rates at both Amazon and GoodReads, so keep that in mind (YMMV). The bottom line is that we found the story entertaining and wanted to know what happened, but there were too many issues for us to fully endorse Legendborn.

Bree Matthews is a young black high school student who is smart and successful enough that she gets admitted, along with her best friend Alice, to the Early College program at the University of North Carolina. Bree didn’t tell her parents that she applied so, when she informs her mom (a UNC alumnus) that she was accepted, her mom freaks out. Then she dies in a car accident which fills Bree with an immense amount of guilt.

When Bree gets to UNC, still grieving, things get weird on the very first night when she breaks the rules by going off campus to a party where she sees some monsters that Alice can’t see and meets some students who seem to know what’s going on. When she begins to suspect that the strange things happening to her may be related to her mother’s perhaps non-accidental death, she investigates by joining the Legendborn – the secret society those students belong to. It turns out to be the Knights of the Round Table who’ve descended directly from King Arthur and his knights.

Bree begins training as a page and meets a couple of amazingly super hot guys who happen to think she’s amazingly super hot, too. Meanwhile, she’s also getting counseling from a psychologist who wants Bree to shun Arthur’s magic and instead learn about the kind of magic that black women call “root.”

Tracy Deonn

Tracy Deonn

As I mentioned, Legendborn was entertaining all the way through and I thought Deonn’s twist on the Arthurian legend was a cool concept, especially the way she addressed race issues. Deonn isn’t at all heavy-handed with this, but it’s an ever-present and thought-provoking undercurrent as Bree never feels like she truly belongs. Bree is aware that some members of the society don’t want her there and, for others, she’s merely a “diversity” candidate. At one point Bree laments that while her Legendborn friends can trace their ancestry all the way back to King Arthur, the knowledge of her own ancestors only goes back a couple of generations because they lost their history when they came to America as slaves. At the end of the novel we discover a particularly ugly race issue at the heart of the story. Grief is another topic that Deonn handles deftly.

While Tali and I liked the premise of Legendborn and how the author dealt with race and grief, we thought the plot suffered from some typical YA pitfalls. Most egregious was the insta-love between Bree and Nick, a descendant of King Arthur. Bree and Nick had known each other for only a couple of days when they both begin acting as if they’d each die for the other and making life-changing decisions based on that. As far as I could tell, they had little in common and hardly knew each other. The rest of the plot hinged on this relationship that was hard to believe in. Along comes another hot and dangerous guy to make a Guinevere – Arthur – Lancelot type of love triangle… sigh, another overused and predictable YA trope, though I appreciated the parallel to the Arthur legend.

Tali declared that there was a little too much going on in this first LEGENDBORN novel and I agree. The story takes place over just a few weeks and things happen too quickly, there are too many types of magic, way too much teenage angst, and too many infodumps, revelations, twists, and surprises for one novel. I rarely say this kind of thing, but this story probably should have been slowed down a bit and dispensed over the course of two novels. That would, for example, give Bree a chance to actually train for the squire competition in which she must defeat opponents who’ve been training all their lives.

The next LEGENDBORN book is expected in 2022. It not even titled yet but, at the moment of this writing, has a 4.64-star rating at GoodReads, which tells you how excited Deonn’s fans are. Again, take our review with a grain of salt, especially if you happen to love the YA tropes that I hate. As I said, YMMV.

We listened to the audiobook version of Legendborn which is 19 hours long and produced by      Simon & Schuster Audio. Actress Joniece Abbott-Pratt’s voice is perfect for Bree but some of her southern accents made me cringe.

Published in 2020. Filled with mystery and an intriguingly rich magic system, Tracy Deonn’s YA contemporary fantasy Legendborn offers the dark allure of City of Bones with a modern-day twist on a classic legend and a lot of Southern Black Girl Magic. After her mother dies in an accident, sixteen-year-old Bree Matthews wants nothing to do with her family memories or childhood home. A residential program for bright high schoolers at UNC–Chapel Hill seems like the perfect escape—until Bree witnesses a magical attack her very first night on campus. A flying demon feeding on human energies. A secret society of so called “Legendborn” students that hunt the creatures down. And a mysterious teenage mage who calls himself a “Merlin” and who attempts—and fails—to wipe Bree’s memory of everything she saw. The mage’s failure unlocks Bree’s own unique magic and a buried memory with a hidden connection: the night her mother died, another Merlin was at the hospital. Now that Bree knows there’s more to her mother’s death than what’s on the police report, she’ll do whatever it takes to find out the truth, even if that means infiltrating the Legendborn as one of their initiates. She recruits Nick, a self-exiled Legendborn with his own grudge against the group, and their reluctant partnership pulls them deeper into the society’s secrets—and closer to each other. But when the Legendborn reveal themselves as the descendants of King Arthur’s knights and explain that a magical war is coming, Bree has to decide how far she’ll go for the truth and whether she should use her magic to take the society down—or join the fight.

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KAT HOOPER, who started this site in June 2007, earned a Ph.D. in neuroscience and psychology at Indiana University (Bloomington) and now teaches and conducts brain research at the University of North Florida. When she reads fiction, she wants to encounter new ideas and lots of imagination. She wants to view the world in a different way. She wants to have her mind blown. She loves beautiful language and has no patience for dull prose, vapid romance, or cheesy dialogue. She prefers complex characterization, intriguing plots, and plenty of action. Favorite authors are Jack Vance, Robin Hobb, Kage Baker, William Gibson, Gene Wolfe, Richard Matheson, and C.S. Lewis.

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2 comments

  1. Zina /

    Hmmmmm. I’ll probably take this one off my reading list. I love Arthurian stories, love the idea, and have two of my own stories based on the legend, but my list is long enough.

    • Well, if you love Arthurian stories, you might like this one a lot better than I did…. but I know how tall your TBR stack is.

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