Tower Lord: A disappointing successor to a promising start

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Tower Lord, book two in Anthony Ryan’s RAVEN’S SHADOW trilogy, picks up where its predecessor, Blood Song, left off, with protagonist Vaelin Al Sorna returning to the Unified Realm following his capture and eventual victory in a duel in the Isles. King Malcius, who has succeeded King Janus to the throne of the Realm, proves to be a fairly weak ruler. Vaelin is eventually reunited with his sister Alornis and is named Tower Lord by King Malcius. Though he is battle-weary and sick of blood, as Tower Lord he is supposed to defend the Realm’s borders in the Northern Reaches. Unfortunately, Vaelin’s hopes of living a life of peace are shattered when both the Northern tribes and the Dark begin to make trouble again.

In many ways, this is perhaps the most powerful part of Tower Lord. I found Blood Song to be a compelling debut, and Tower Lord built upon Blood Song’s world-building and setting. Anthony Ryan introduces us to the fierce Lonak and Seordak tribes in the Great Northern Forest. Furthermore, the Dark and the Void begin to play a much larger role in Tower Lord. The magic system in RAVEN’S SHADOW is by no means typical or unimaginative, and introducing more magic into the series helps Ryan expand the scope of the plot. That said, all of these positive aspects combined fail to save Tower Lord from some devastating missteps.

A Raven's Shadow Novel (3 Book Series) by Anthony RyanIn Blood Song, Lord Vernier’s account, which occurs after the events in Blood Song, is used as a frame story that exposed future details, leaving a tantalizing taste of disaster to come and providing insight into Vaelin’s character and darker sides. In both Tower Lord and Queen of Fire (book three), however, Anthony Ryan decided to eliminate this structure. Lord Vernier’s account becomes a storyline that transpires concurrently with the main plot. Not only does this remove a crucial addition to tone and foreshadowing previously existing in Blood Song, but the decision to merge Vernier’s story into the present of the novel is also frustrating in that it becomes a larger portion of the overall story but is not sufficiently fleshed out to feel important. This, along with a few other issues, are carried on into Queen of Fire.

Structural issues aside, there are a few other missteps that make Tower Lord a disappointment. Both the rhythm and the pacing in Tower Lord are disrupted when Ryan introduces multiple viewpoints into the series, especially since Lord Vernier’s account is no longer serving as a frame to pull these different accounts together. At many points, a severe lack of action made it tough to continue reading Tower Lord. Moreover, I sometimes found Ryan’s plot transitions to be unconvincing and uneven, worsening my issues with the lack of action. All in all, while I recommend checking out Blood Song, I wouldn’t particularly recommend continuing the series to any but the most diehard Anthony Ryan fans.

Published in 2014. In Blood Song, Anthony Ryan introduced readers to “a fascinating world of conflicting religions and the wars fought in the name of those faiths” (Library Journal). Now Ryan’s epic tale continues as Vaelin Al Sorna discovers that there is no escape from the call of destiny… “The blood-song rose with an unexpected tune, a warm hum mingling recognition with an impression of safety. He had a sense it was welcoming him home.” Vaelin Al Sorna, warrior of the Sixth Order, called Darkblade, called Hope Killer. The greatest warrior of his day, and witness to the greatest defeat of his nation: King Janus’s vision of a Greater Unified Realm drowned in the blood of brave men fighting for a cause Vaelin alone knows was forged from a lie. Sick at heart, he comes home, determined to kill no more. Named Tower Lord of the Northern Reaches by King Janus’s grateful heir, he can perhaps find peace in a colder, more remote land far from the intrigues of a troubled Realm. But those gifted with the blood-song are never destined to live a quiet life. Many died in King Janus’s wars, but many survived, and Vaelin is a target, not just for those seeking revenge but for those who know what he can do. The Faith has been sundered, and many have no doubt who their leader should be. The new King is weak, but his sister is strong. The blood-song is powerful, rich in warning and guidance in times of trouble, but is only a fraction of the power available to others who understand more of its mysteries. Something moves against the Realm, something that commands mighty forces, and Vaelin will find to his great regret that when faced with annihilation, even the most reluctant hand must eventually draw a sword.

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KEVIN WEI, with us since December 2014, is political/digital strategist based in Harlem. Secretly, Kevin has always believed in dragons. Not the Smaug kind of dragon, only the friendly ones that invite you in for tea (a href="http://www.fantasyliterature.com/fantasy-author/funkecornelia">Funke’s Dragon Rider was the story that mercilessly hauled him into the depths of SF/F at the ripe old age of 5). Kevin loves epic fantasy, military SF/F, New Weird, and some historical fantasy; some of his favorite authors include Patrick Rothfuss, George R.R. Martin, Neil Gaiman, China Miéville, Django Wexler, and Joe Abercrombie. In his view, a good book requires not only a good character set and storyline, but also beautiful prose — he's extremely particular about this last bit. You can find him at: kevinlwei.com

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2 comments

  1. It sounds like the Jinx of the Second Book is alive and well here.

  2. I agree with Marion–and Blood Song does sound interesting, so it’s even more of a disappointment that Tower Lord wasn’t as successful for you, Kevin.

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