Seekers of the Chalice: Great premise, bad execution

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fantasy book reviews science fiction book reviewsfantasy book reviews Brian Cullen Seekers of the ChaliceSeekers of the Chalice by Brian  Cullen

Seekers of the Chalice is the story of a small group of heroes who set out to recover the Chalice of Fire, a symbol of peace for Ulster, after it is stolen from the Red Branch by a traitor.

The premise behind the book, which is an attempt to do a high fantasy retelling of the traditional Celtic myth Táin Bó Cúailnge, is great. However, the execution falters. The characters are flat, the dialogue stilted, and the plot is an endless series of near identical battles against every imaginable dark creature. Pixies and goblins and werewolves, oh my!

Cullen commits the cardinal sin for a writer by telling — not showing — the story. His attempt to lay out the entire back story in the first few pages leaves Seekers of the Chalice feeling like lecture notes for a class on Irish Mythology. It then morphs into a bad novelization of someone’s D&D campaign.

Even though Seekers of the Chalice was an easy read, it wasn’t an entertaining one, and it left me with no desire to continue reading. I’d be interested in seeing if Cullen improves over time. He can come up with some interesting concepts, but his implementation is lacking. Maybe with more experience, his execution can live up to his ideas.


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RUTH ARNELL (on FanLit's staff January 2009 — August 2013) earned a Ph.D. in political science and is a college professor in Idaho. From a young age she has maxed out her library card the way some people do credit cards. Ruth started reading fantasy with A Wrinkle in Time and The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe — books that still occupy an honored spot on her bookshelf today. Ruth and her husband have a young son, but their house is actually presided over by a flame-point Siamese who answers, sometimes, to the name of Griffon.

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  1. this is the best book ive ever read he did a great job on telling the store from the start to end he is a great author he left the end of the book in the best place making it where I wanted more I couldn’t whit for the next one

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