The Phoenix Exultant: Disappointing sequel

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I was really disappointed with The Phoenix Exultant, the second novel in John C. Wright’s THE GOLDEN AGE series, especially considering how much I had enjoyed its predecessor, The Golden Age. In many ways The Phoenix Exultant just did not feel like a true continuation of the first book.

One of the major stumbling blocks for me was that I just couldn’t believe the way Wright handled the voices he used for the characters in this volume. Considering his mannered and baroque set up in the previous volume I found the dialogue to be way too colloquial (and 20th century colloquial at that). Maybe Wright was trying to show Phaeton “stepping down” a level, both socially due to his exile and intellectually due to his loss of certain artificial brain upgrades, but it really grated on me. Atkins and Daphne were also throwing around way too much colloquial verbiage in my humble opinion.

I also think Wright relied far too much on exposition for character actions and motives… he told us way more than he showed us, as if he felt he had to explain all of the details to us because we’d never figure it out for ourselves.

I understand that these characters are posthumans who are able to modify themselves in various ways, but it seemed like the character of Daphne became a completely different person. She goes from victim to hero in one mighty leap that has no explanation… I guess she must have downloaded the Nancy Drew persona since the last volume.

Ultimately, in looking back after I finished it, it seemed that not very much really happened in the course of The Phoenix Exultant. Phaeton just acts more or less clueless and like a pompous ass and eventually finds the loopholes (and hidden allies) he needs thanks to the plot master (don’t look behind the curtain!).

Certainly it wasn’t all bad, but the sensawunda and deeper level of thought and execution of The Golden Age were missing for the most part in The Phoenix Exultant.


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TERRY LAGO, one of our regular guest reviewers, is a Torontonian who, like all arts students, now works in the IT field. He has been a fan of fantasy ever since being introduced to Tolkien by his older brother when he was only a wee lad, though he has since branched out to enjoy all spectrums of the Fantasy genre and quite a few of the science fiction one as well. Literary prose linked with well-drawn characters are the things he most looks for in a book. You can see what he's currently reading at his Goodreads page.

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