The Emperor’s Soul: Partially meets my high expectations

The Emperor’s Soul by Brandon Sanderson

Shai is a forger, able to magically change any item by rewriting its history. For example, she can turn a battered piece of furniture into the beautiful object it could have been by bonding with it, understanding its past and how it sees itself, and then altering the past enough to change the furniture’s destiny. Unfortunately, forgery is despised by the empire because forgers often use their skills to counterfeit famous artists’ work. In fact, Shai is currently in prison for doing just this — she was caught trying to steal the emperor’s scepter so she could replace it with her own forgery.

Usually in a case like this Shai would be executed, but the emperor’s closest advisors decide they need her forbidden skills instead. The emperor has recently survived an assassination attempt, but his doctors were only able to save him by giving him a new brain. Now he lives, but his brain is empty — his memories and personality are gone. His arbiters, whose positions and livelihoods are dependent on this emperor’s reign, want Shai to do something illegal; they want her to recreate the emperor by forging his soul.

Of course Shai must take this job, or she’ll be executed, but she knows that despite the arbiters’ promises, she’ll be killed when she’s done because they don’t want anyone knowing the truth about the emperor. Shai works diligently to do the job they want, but she also plans for escape. Yet as she continues to progress, her artist’s pride begins to enjoy the challenge. Does she have the skill to produce the ultimate forgery? And does she really want to, or should she use this opportunity to remodel the emperor?

I’ve come to expect a lot from Brandon Sanderson: unique and fascinating detailed magic systems, interesting settings, likeable characters, and the perfect amount of truly funny humor. Sanderson’s new novella, The Emperor’s Soul, partially meets my expectations. Shai is likeable enough, though she’s not especially memorable. I missed Sanderson’s sense of humor in this novella, not because I think every story needs to have some humor, but because I particularly like Brandon Sanderson’s sense of humor and look forward to that element in his work.

Sanderson’s magic system is inventive and intriguing and allows us the opportunity to think about some ideas that I find really interesting, such as how personalities are formed. However, Shai’s detailed explanations of her craft and all its rules tend to dominate and bog down the plot and, because this book is so short, it feels unbalanced. Furthermore, unlike Sanderson’s previous magic systems, I can’t say that I truly believed in this one. For one thing, if Shai is forging objects by changing their histories or their construction, won’t this have other far-reaching effects on the world and not just the object being forged? If the battered piece of furniture is altered so that it thinks it was loved and cared for, or so it was made from different materials, then not only its history is changed, but there are people or objects involved whose histories are now perceived as different, too. Sanderson addresses this with rules (e.g., the forgery won’t take if it’s too far from reality) but I wasn’t completely convinced.

Even more problematic, though, is trying to forge a personality. In order to do so, Shai must understand the emperor. She makes clear that this is difficult and takes a lot of time and research because people’s motives and desires are intricate and conflicting, but it’s really so much more than that. Not only can we not understand our own motives and desires, we don’t really even know what they are and they’re dependent on too many factors — our genes, our prenatal environment, our upbringing, and so many factors that we can’t possibly identify. We wouldn’t be able to do this for ourselves, much less someone who we can only know from reading histories and a diary. Especially if that person had a brand new brain that was wiped clean of all the factors that built the personality in the first place. It just doesn’t work.

But still, if we can put aside our doubts, Sanderson’s story is enjoyable and makes a great thought exercise. For example, Sanderson made me wonder what makes art beautiful. Why is an original work of art so much more appealing than a perfect copy? It’s got to be more than just the way it looks. Also it was interesting to consider how people’s personalities are gradually changed over time by outside influences and how in some cases that’s a good thing and in others it’s not.

I’m being a little tough on The Emperor’s Soul, but that’s partly because my expectations are so high for Brandon Sanderson’s work. The man writes great fantasy and it’s exciting to see him trying new things, including two shorter stand-alone works this year. More newness is expected for next year and those books are already on my TBR list, as is everything Sanderson writes.

I listened to Angela Lin’s pleasant performance in Recorded Books’ audio version of The Emperor’s Soul which I can heartily recommend for those who want to read Sanderson’s latest novella.
~Kat Hooper

I enjoyed the world in which this novella was set, and found the story enjoyable. I’d love to read more set in this world, involving this magic system. (And no, it didn’t strike me as being the same world on which Elantris was set, though apparently that was the intention.)
~Terry Weyna

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KAT HOOPER, who started this site in June 2007, earned a Ph.D. in neuroscience and psychology at Indiana University (Bloomington) and now teaches at the University of North Florida. When she reads fiction, she wants to encounter new ideas and lots of imagination. She wants to view the world in a different way. She wants to have her mind blown. She loves beautiful language and has no patience for dull prose, vapid romance, or cheesy dialogue. She prefers complex characterization, intriguing plots, and plenty of action. Favorite authors are Jack Vance, Robin Hobb, Kage Baker, William Gibson, Gene Wolfe, Richard Matheson, and C.S. Lewis.

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TERRY WEYNA, on our staff since December 2010, would rather be reading than doing almost anything else. She longs to be a full-time reviewer, critic, scholar and writer, but nonetheless continues to practice law as a civil litigator in California. Terry lives in Northern California with her husband, professor emeritus and writer Fred White, the imperious but aging Cordelia Louise Cat Weyna-White, and a forever-growing personal library that presently exceeds 15,000 volumes.

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  1. Yeah, from your description, I’m getting hung up on the changing of history too. Like…if you forged a painting so that it was done by Leonardo da Vinci, doesn’t that mean that you’ve changed history so that he really did paint it, and then maybe he didn’t have time to paint the Mona Lisa or something else we know? And what does it do to people’s memories if the artist is still living?

  2. (I haven’t read this yet, but)… Maybe Shai just hypnotizes the chair and implants false memories, yes? That way history isn’t really changed. Oh, wait…

    • Sir Read-a-Lot /

      Marion, that’s basically what happens. She’s changing how the object sees itself, and because this is magic, A)objects have self-perception, and B) changing this perception changes the physical identity of the object.

      • Kevin B /

        Yea, the review doesn’t explain the magic very well IMO.

        Actual history isn’t changed, nor that of anyone/anything related to the forging, just the “essence” of the forged item. Some of the things that are done with it are really imaginative. I thought it was rather clever (my favorite Sanderson magic since Mistborn’s Allomancy) and that it worked really well.

        I honestly wasn’t expecting to like it very much, but for me it turned out to be the best single best piece of writing from Sanderson to date. (Though The Final Empire is still my favorite Sanderson book all around.)

        • OK, so the forged item just thinks it’s genuine, or in good condition, or whatever, and so then its appearance is changed? That makes more sense.

  3. Correct, only the history of the object is changed, but i had some trouble with that because the object now thinks it (and all the other objects and people involved) have different histories. Events have changed for it. It can even be made from different materials that came from a different places. But I can get over that. My main problem was Shai’s ability to forge a personality without knowing the emperor or even having much information about him. Granted, she was really skeptical of this, too!

  4. It’s been a while since I’ve read anything by Sanderson, the glaring exception being the Wheel of Time, of course. However, your review intrigues me, and I think I might need to go pick up a copy.


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