SHORTS: Kritzer, Valentine, Robson, McClellan, Reed

Our feature exploring free and inexpensive short fiction available on the internet. Here are a few stories we’ve read that we want to share with readers.

“Field Biology of the Wee Fairies” by Naomi Kritzer (2018, free at Apex Magazine, $2.99 Kindle magazine issue)When Amelia turns fourteen, everyone assures her that she’ll catch her fairy soon. Almost every girl catches a fairy, and the fairy will give you a gift if you promise to let her go. The gift is always something like “beauty or charm or perfect hair or something else that made boys notice you.” What no one around Amelia realizes is that she doesn’t want to catch a fairy. Amelia has no interest in becoming more beautiful, through fairy magic or otherwise; what she really wants is for her science teacher, Mr. Crawford, to let girls join the high school science club. (It’s 1962, so no one is forcing Mr. Crawford to treat girls equally). Maybe he’ll relent if she wins the upcoming District Science fair with her mouse behavioral study?

So when Amelia sees a lovely little turquoise-clad fairy hovering in front of her face, she just ignores the fairy … until it occurs to Amanda that there might be other, more scientific reasons to catch a fairy. She wants to capture and examine the fairy without letting it touch her and possibly work some unwanted beautification on her. And those glass jars with perforated lids that Amanda uses for the mice in her behavioral study could be just the thing!

“Field Biology of the Wee Fairies” is an appealing story with some creative twists that really elevate the tale to something memorable. Naomi Kritzer deftly recreates a realistic 1962 America setting ― except, of course, with the addition of magical fairies. Amelia’s parents are fairly forward-thinking for the time (” ‘Don’t go trading away your brains, girl,’ her father said. ‘You can have looks and smarts.’ ”), but Amelia’s mother is still hoping for Amelia to pay just a little more attention to her outward appearance. Amelia’s conversation with the fairy is amusing as well as surprising, and the cute neighbor girl Betty plays a much more interesting role in the story than I anticipated. ~Tadiana Jones


“Terrain” by Genevieve Valentine (2013, free at Tor.com, 99c Kindle version)

“Terrain” is a very lightly-steampunk story filled with historically-accurate details about life in Wyoming during the days of railroad expansion and the Pony Express. A diverse group of social outcasts have gradually built a home together on a small homestead on the outskirts of River Pass, where each grows vegetables or performs maintenance on steam-driven “Dogs,” insectile all-terrain contraptions that allow riders to take messages and parcels to places that the Pony Express riders can’t access. Each of the members of this little group has a reason to fear and mistrust both strangers and the townspeople, and the uneasy peace between this homestead and the town of River Pass is broken when a representative from Union Pacific comes through, looking for landowners who are willing to sell their acreage. Elijah, the only one of them who can legally own land, turns down the UP’s offer, jeopardizing River Pass’ chances at the wealth and goods a railway station would bring.

The sun sets in bands of red and gold, and one of turquoise just ahead of the night; sunrise is cool in summer and sharp in winter, like ice cracking; and the horizon’s so unbroken that weather isn’t a surprise—you see clouds well ahead of the rain.

“Terrain” is a lovely story, with nuanced, poetic descriptions of the land and the people who banded together: quiet, kind Elijah himself; Faye and her twin brother Frank, Shoshone adults who experienced the horrors of a forced-conversion school as children; Maria, who very nearly works magic with the soil; Fa Liang, who crafted the Dogs; and Joseph, a freedman and blacksmith. Some of their characteristics could have been more thoroughly plumbed, but overall it’s easy to see why these people came together and are willing to fight for one another. Valentine fills the text with anger and resentment against the faceless groups and specific people who aren’t content to let the homestead and its residents be, and does an excellent job of placing this story in a specific geographical location and historical context.

“Terrain” is a stand-alone story, but should Valentine choose to return to this setting in the future, I’d happily read more. ~Jana Nyman


“A Study in Oils” by Kelly Robson (2018, free at Clarkesworld magazine, $2.99 Kindle magazine issue)

Zhang Lei is a former high-profile player in the Luna hockey league. He committed a crime that resulted in a “disable button” being added to his online profile, visible to anyone that sees him, labeling him as a killer. This virtual disable button can be triggered by anyone who can see it, causing Zhang Lei to lose consciousness for several minutes. When life on Luna became untenable for Zhang Lei, he bolted for Earth. Now he’s in hiding in a remote Chinese village, Paizuo, while Marta, a semi-friendly social worker, tries to convince an Earth tribunal to revoke his punishment as overly harsh.

Time drags for Zhang Lei in Paizuo, with no friends and little to do besides work on his artistic hobby. But Marta tells him that three teams of Lunite brawlers are scouting around on Earth, slowly tracking him down, and intent on finishing him off.

“A Study in Oils” is deliberately paced (read: rather slow), and it took a while for me to get into the story. But Zhang Lei is an interesting protagonist, impatient and aggrieved, who gradually becomes more sympathetic as he tries to deal with an unfamiliar world and his vast loss, shame, and personal danger. The future world described in “A Study in Oils” feels realistic, with widespread online linkups and punishment techniques that grow out of that, while at the same time its characters display familiar human reactions and resentments. ~Tadiana Jones


Return to Honor by Brian McClellan (2015, available on Kindle ($2.99) and at Audible)

Return to Honor is one of several novellas in Brian McClellan’s POWDER MAGE trilogy. I haven’t read the POWDER MAGE novels yet, but I have read many of the short stories and novellas. I like McClellan’s world.

In this story, which happens after the events of the first book, Promise of Blood, Captain Vlora, a powder mage, is trying to redeem herself after betraying someone. Her actions have caused her to be ostracized by her peers and she’s feeling pretty low. Her current assignment is to track down a traitor and recover the documents he stole. Being extremely unpopular, she assumes that nobody will be willing to help her, but then she finds an unlikely partner.

These POWDER MAGE stories are very pleasant, with an interesting magic system and well-built world. I really need to read the novels. This audiobook version of Return to Honor was narrated by Christian Rodska, who does a great job. ~Kat Hooper


“Insights” by Robert Reed (2018, free at Daily Science Fiction)

“Insights” is set in a world where nearly everyone has a “Third Eye” (basically an AI/AR) and a host of things are augmented. I enjoyed the basic premise of the story, which we see via a cougar with “augmentation woven into his feline brain … every major predator needs guidance. That’s why this cougar can’t approach the man, much less hurt him.” I didn’t feel, however, that the premise was fully mined or that the execution was as sharp as I would have preferred. Things also got a little overwrought toward the end. ~Bill Capossere


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TADIANA JONES, on our staff since July 2015, is an intellectual property lawyer with a BA in English. She inherited her love of classic and hard SF from her father and her love of fantasy and fairy tales from her mother. She lives with her husband and four children in a small town near the mountains in Utah. Tadiana juggles her career, her family, and her love for reading, travel and art, only occasionally dropping balls. She likes complex and layered stories and characters with hidden depths. Favorite authors include Lois McMaster Bujold, Brandon Sanderson, Robin McKinley, Connie Willis, Isaac Asimov, Larry Niven, Megan Whalen Turner, Patricia McKillip, Mary Stewart, Ilona Andrews, and Susanna Clarke.

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JANA NYMAN, with us since January 2015, is a freelance copy-editor who has lived all over the United States, but now makes her home in Colorado with her dog and a Wookiee. Jana was exposed to science fiction and fantasy at an early age, watching Star Wars and Star Trek movie marathons with her family and reading works by Robert Heinlein and Ray Bradbury WAY before she was old enough to understand them; thus began a lifelong fascination with what it means to be human. Jana enjoys reading all kinds of books, but her particular favorites are fairy- and folktales (old and new), fantasy involving dragons or other mythological beasties, contemporary science fiction, and superhero fiction. Some of her favorite authors are James Tiptree, Jr., Madeleine L'Engle, Ann Leckie, N.K. Jemisin, and Seanan McGuire.

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KAT HOOPER, who started this site in June 2007, earned a Ph.D. in neuroscience and psychology at Indiana University (Bloomington) and now teaches and conducts brain research at the University of North Florida. When she reads fiction, she wants to encounter new ideas and lots of imagination. She wants to view the world in a different way. She wants to have her mind blown. She loves beautiful language and has no patience for dull prose, vapid romance, or cheesy dialogue. She prefers complex characterization, intriguing plots, and plenty of action. Favorite authors are Jack Vance, Robin Hobb, Kage Baker, William Gibson, Gene Wolfe, Richard Matheson, and C.S. Lewis.

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BILL CAPOSSERE, who's been with us since June 2007, lives in Rochester NY, where he is an English adjunct by day and a writer by night. His essays and stories have appeared in Colorado Review, Rosebud, Alaska Quarterly, and other literary journals, along with a few anthologies, and been recognized in the "Notable Essays" section of Best American Essays. His children's work has appeared in several magazines, while his plays have been given stage readings at GEVA Theatre and Bristol Valley Playhouse. When he's not writing, reading, reviewing, or teaching, he can usually be found with his wife and son on the frisbee golf course or the ultimate frisbee field.

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3 comments

  1. Bill, my writers group and I rated “Insights” somewhere between “poor” and “incomprehensible.” Other than, maybe,a warning about paying attention to your environment when you’re hiking (or a gratuitous slam at wives) we could not see the point. Because Reed is so established, we wondered if the word count limit proved an obstacle.

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