Breathe: Failed across the board

Breathe by Sarah CrossanBreathe by Sarah Crossan

Breathe, by Sarah Crossan, is an unremarkable new entry in the teen dystopia field. Its premise is relatively simple: in the far future, the world’s oxygen level has dropped so far that people are relegated to living in oxygenated “pods,” where “Premiums” get all the oxygen they want and the commoners have to get by with far less. One result of this disparity is that the average person has to carefully moderate their physical activity (there are “speeding” laws with regard to walking) while the Premiums can go for a nice little job with their personal oxygen tanks. The company that controls the oxygenating process, Breathe, controls the pod. It will come as no surprise that they’re just a little corrupt and power-hungry.

We’re introduced to this world via three teen points of view. Alina is a commoner who is also a member of the resistance, a group trying to take down Breathe as well as break the pod’s monopoly on human existence, both by long-term re-oxygenation of the atmosphere and by short-term retraining of people to enable them to survive in the outside. She’s embittered and wide awake to the realities of this world, though not utterly aware of how far the resistance will go. Quinn is the son of a higher-up Premium and is being groomed to take his own place among the elites. Bea is his commoner best friend. Both have so far blithely accepted all they’ve been taught of their society’s workings, though that will soon change once their paths intersect with Alina’s. As one might expect, the seemingly inevitable triangle forms: Bea wants to be with Quinn while Quinn, oblivious to Bea’s desire, wants to be with Alina. Alina, meanwhile, just wants to be with the Resistance.

As is usual with books I don’t much care for, this will be a relatively quick review, as I don’t like to belabor a book’s flaws or bash an author who has at least accomplished completing a novel, even if it wasn’t a very good one. To begin with, Breathe’s plot is not particularly compelling or surprising. The three characters are introduced one after the other and then quickly end up outside the pod together. In short order they are facing off with Breathe’s soldiers and running into the Resistance, though there was never any real sense of danger or urgency with regard to what might happen to them. Worse, many of the violent encounters felt a bit cartoonish and barely sketched in.

The worldbuilding is also pretty sketchy. I had a problem with the general premise as it was presented, and while there are occasional flashes of sharp details, mostly in the early sections, overall the setting and society never come alive as real constructs. The same is true of the characters, who do change but in pretty much predictable fashion. None of the side characters, save one (an old woman whose been outside for some time), feel fully fleshed out, playing more as types or plot necessities than real people (one might get my pick for worst naming of the year, a villain named “Cain Knavery”). The prose is mostly pedestrian throughout, rarely rising above merely functional and at times its simplistic, repetitive nature was distractingly noticeable.

Breathe ends with some resolution but with a clear path forward. I, however, will not be picking up book two. For me, Breathe failed across the board: character, story, setting, style. I recommend passing.

Published October 2, 2012. Inhale. Exhale. Breathe. Breathe. Breathe… The world is dead. The survivors live under the protection of Breathe, the corporation that found a way to manufacture oxygen–rich air. Alina has been stealing for a long time. She’s a little jittery, but not terrified. All she knows is that she’s never been caught before. If she’s careful, it’ll be easy. If she’s careful. Quinn should be worried about Alina and a bit afraid for himself, too, but even though this is dangerous, it’s also the most interesting thing to happen to him in ages. It isn’t every day that the girl of your dreams asks you to rescue her. Bea wants to tell him that none of this is fair; they’d planned a trip together, the two of them, and she’d hoped he’d discover her out here, not another girl. And as they walk into the Outlands with two days’ worth of oxygen in their tanks, everything they believe will be shattered. Will they be able to make it back? Will they want to?

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BILL CAPOSSERE lives in Rochester NY, where he is lately spending much of his time trying to finish a book-length collection of essays and a full-length play. His prior work has appeared in Colorado Review, Rosebud, Alaska Quarterly, and other journals and been recognized in the "Notable Essays" section of several Best American Essay anthologies. When he's not writing, reading, reviewing, co-writing the Malazan Empire re-read at Tor.com, or working as an English adjunct, he can usually be found with his wife and son on the frisbee golf course, the ultimate frisbee field, or trying to keep up with his wife's flute and his son's trumpet on the clarinet he just picked up this month.

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One comment

  1. No discussion of the impact of a reduced oxygen intake on brain development?

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