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The Eyes of God (The Lukien Trilogy) — (2001-2005) Publisher: Akeela was the king of Liiria. Young and idealistic, he was determined to bring peace to his kingdom — a land that had been plagued by war with the neighboring kingdom of Reec for decades. Beloved by his people and called “Akeela the Good,” he revered knowledge as well as peace, and vowed to make Liiria a haven of learning the like of which the world had never known. Now, he had come to parley in Hes, capital city of Reec, with gifts from his subjects to their age-old enemy, King Karis. For protection, Akeela brought his Royal Chargers, Liiria's elite fighting corps, led by the infamous Bronze Knight, a man as feared as the young king was loved...

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Forthcoming: The Forever Knight. From John Marco's website: “The Forever Knight deals with Lukien’s life after he’s found the fabled Sword of Angels, a life-giving weapon that’s bestowed on him unwanted immortality. He struggles with the great powers he posseses and finds himself as a knight-errant, searching not only for adventure but for the meaning of his own confusing life as well. It’s also a tale about a monster, and an undead army enslaved to a sorcerous king, all of whom press Lukien to the breaking point.”


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John Marco The Eyes of God (Lukien): The Eyes of God, The Devil's Armor, The Sword of AngelsThe Eyes of God is a sprawling, medieval fantasy novel. The seed for the next book (The Devil's Armor) is planted well in the first, and I hope more of the good than the bad from the first book carries over.

The Eyes of God consists of three parts. (And before that, a beautiful cover — one of its very best features.) The first is basically a rehashing of Camelot's love triangle. The book does open very well indeed with excellent, fresh introductions of the scholarly King Akeela the Good; his handsome champion, Lukien the Bronze Knight; and his new bride, Cassandra, the beautiful seal on a peace treaty. However, even with the twist of Cassandra's mysterious illness and Lukien's quest to heal her, the first part fails to escape Camelot's shadow — it simply starts too squarely within it.

The second part begins sixteen years after the first, depicting how the consequences of the first have transformed Akeela the Good into the drunken, insane Akeela the Ghost. A crippled boy, Gilwyn, born in the first part, takes center stage and finds himself drawn into the tragic current of the past, which is sweeping the kingdom and a peaceful, foreign land into an even more destructive future. This theme continues in the third part, which introduces a hidden sanctuary of "Inhumans," persons born or made deformed, and the mysterious woman and spirits who lead and assist them.

John Marco's main strengths are his no-nonsense writing style and ability to describe large battles. However, these are often hindered, and in places overcome, by some very poor dialogue and questionable plotting. At times, the noble/successful/intelligent characters make utterly capricious decisions that, in retrospect, seem to have been made just so that the plot could follow a fixed outline. (A minor quibble/example: over a period of years, wouldn't even the most inept husband be able to make love in total darkness to his wife? A strange question, I know, but the book's answer — for the plot's sake — is apparently not.) Sporadic grammatical errors (and some typos) also distract from what could have been so much more.

The Eyes of God is a big, beefy page-turner that's sadly on the too-raw side. Recommended as a library loan or used-paperback buy. However, John Marco does have a "feel" for storytelling that makes him one to watch. —Rob Rhodes

The Tyrants and Kings Trilogy — (1999-2001) Publisher: This powerful, multilayered saga features a complicated hero: brave yet sensitive General Richius Vantran. Ordered by the Emperor to halt a revolt by a religious faction, Vantran's success wins him both Imperial favor and a wife — though neither sits well with him. For in battle, he fell in love with a member of the very religious faction he put down. Torn between duty and passion, Vantran surprises himself by choosing to love the enemy—and march against his old companions.

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The Skylords — (2009) Ages 9-12. A steampunk fantasy trilogy for younger readers. From the Author's website: What would life be like if you could fly? Young Moth of Calio wants to know. He’s obsessed with the airships around his mountain home and dreams of becoming a Skyknight one day, to take to the air like his heroes... And thanks to the inventive genius of Fiona’s grandfather Rendor, humans have finally taken to the sky, not only in giant airships but in small, ornithopter contraptions called dragonflies as well. Not everyone is happy to see mankind’s progress, however. For thousands of years, the mysterious and powerful race known as the Skylords have jealously guarded their heavenly domain. In all this time, an uneasy peace has existed between humans and Skylords, but Moth and Fiona John Marco The Skylords 1. Starfinderare about to breach themagical boundary between the two worlds.


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Starfinder is the story of Moth, an orphaned child obsessed with learning how to fly, and Fiona, the granddaughter of the Governor of Calio, an outpost on the edge of civilization. Calio borders on the Reach, a featureless miles-wide expanse that is supposed to be impossible to cross, covered in an impenetrable mist that conceals and confuses the traveler. The Reach separates the human lands from the mythical Skylords, angelic beings who jealously guard the skies to keep any other race from achieving flight.

Moth is given the Starfinder, the most powerful magical artifact of the Skylords, by his dying guardian and is charged with crossing the impassible Reach and returning the Starfinder to the wizard Merceron. Fiona accompanies Moth, and the two are relentlessly pursued by her grandfather, intent on acquiring the Starfinder for his own purposes.

Starfinder read like two books. The first half kind of meandered along. The plot was slow and the characters seemed flat and cliché. I was having problems staying interested, and kept finding other things to read. About half way through, however, the writing took on a new life as the pace quickened, the characters developed another dimension, and a new character was introduced — Alisaundra, an enslaved Redeemer whose tragic focus underscores the depravity of the Skylords. I actually stayed up late to finish the final chapters of Starfinder.

Fiona and Moth both grow up a lot in this book, and it will be interesting to see what happens in future Skylord volumes. John Marco writes gripping fight scenes and is able to give each of the races a different fighting style appropriate for their abilities. Starfinder is a YA novel, but deals with some serious matters. Marco doesn’t sugarcoat the action and there’s no magical ending where all the characters are protected from anything bad happening to them.

Marco manages to tie up most of the loose ends (though I’m still confused about what being a child has to do with being able to work the Starfinder) and he sets up an ongoing conflict that will be played out in future volumes. I hope Marco gives a better explanation for The Reach and why it is exists, and why it is believed to be uncrossable when the characters in this book traverse it so easily.

Starfinder was uneven, but the second half was good enough to make me want to read the next Skylords book. I hope Marco can sustain the quality. —Ruth Arnell


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